I put it back up....me singing?

i took this one down before...because of what people said but decided to put it back up. its "amazing grace"...well part of it





i know i need some work [im working on getting a vocal coach] and its a little shakey..but nothing too mean. please?











http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MkNj_FNfH...
I put it back up....me singing?
okay, youve got the basics of vowels, which makes it much easier.





however...


try not to go for fancy improv until you can do it the way it's written perfectly. you cant walk before you crawl.





too much vibrato. that may be nerves, but it's probably bad air and tone control. take deep breaths and control it as you sing, dont let it spill out like you do in the recording.





besides that, nice voice. GOOD LUCK!!!
Reply:aha.


thats like 1 line.
Reply:what do u want me to say ur bad... cuz u r DEFINATLEY NOT!
Reply:Very good a little scrathcy on amazing grace otherwise your really good try getting that top note easyer
Reply:That was really quite good! You are an awesome singer and I don't know why people would say anything bad about you!
Reply:Do you have a vocal coach? You should get one. The tones in your voice are beautiful, you just need some training and you'd be an awesome singer. So glad you put it back up :-)